The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates the research data on hot beverage consumption habits in five Australian cities. It can be clearly observed that the majority of them have a routine of going to a cafe for a
coffee
, or tea within the
last
four weeks.
However
, a minority of them liked buying fresh
coffee
last
month. Considering the graph, most
coffee
drinkers that visited a
coffee
place were from Melbourne and Hobart and
this
was at a level of 60% for both towns.
In contrast
, Adelaide held the
last
place with a percentage of 39% going to a java lounge.
In addition
, exactly half of that
municipality
Change noun form
municipality's
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population preferred buying instant
coffee
rather than buying store-made ones.
Consequently
, at least 35% of Brisbanians bought fresh caffeine within the previous 4 weeks and
this
was the lowest rate of fresh
coffee
consumers from all five localities.
Furthermore
, Sydney civilians were the second highest
coffee
bar visitors and covered more than 60% of their population.
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