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The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the countries British people have gone to settle in between the years 2004 to 2007. The population is indicated in thousands. It can be clearly observed that the majority has selected
Australia
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 as their destination
while
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 the minority has moved to New Zealand and the USA. During the period the highest amount to emigrate to a country was in 2006 and it was to
Australia
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.
Australia
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 was selected by a significant portion of
British
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the British
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 in the year 2004
whereas
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 New Zealand held the least popularity.
Similarly
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,
this
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 trend continued over the years except for 2005. In 2005 passengers only as
little
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few
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 as 18,000 chose the USA over
the
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apply
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New Zealand.
However
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, in 2006, over 50,000 people selected
Australia
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 as their home and Spain came in second place.
In contrast
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, in the year 2007, only 18000 settled in France which is the smallest number to move to another geographical location.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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