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The maps show two different plans designed for a conference room.

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The picture illustrates the two design options for a conference
room
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.
Although
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 the arrangement of the
room
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 in both two plans is different, they include common basic furniture
such
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 as tables, chairs, a whiteboard and a podium. At first glance, it can be seen that the entrance of the
room
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 is placed on the right. In the middle, the seating for the conference is arranged in a U shape facing a podium and a whiteboard.
While
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 these two pieces of furniture are located close to the wall and near the entrance in
plan
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 A, they are placed in the centre of the seating area with the whiteboard behind the podium in
plan
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 B.
According to
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 the design, there is a zone for morning tea. In
plan
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 A, it is placed behind the seating area.
However
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,
for
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plan
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 B, is situated in the upper-left corner of the
room
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 in an L-shape.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, plan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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