The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduates students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

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The graph bars above illustrate the destination of

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graduates compared to

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the destination

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postgraduates, both in 2008 and excluding

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apply

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full-time

job

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jobs

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. It's clear that most

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graduates and postgraduates would continue to study.

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voluntary work was the least option

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chosen by both groups. Almost 30,000

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graduates chose to get deeper knowledge into their studies,

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nearly 18,000 individuals had part-time

occupation

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occupations

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, it seems 16,235 people struggle to have a stable job, even though they have a bachelor's degree altogether with them.

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, only 3,500 did voluntary work in 2008.

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majority

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of former

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postgraduate

students took

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advanced studies in the United Kingdom, yet the number is small compared to bachelor's degrees at only 2,725. Around 2,500 people with master's degrees engaged in part-time work,

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1,625 individuals were not able to land a single job. The number of voluntary,

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, are smallest of all at just 345.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

161 words

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pursue
enhance
skillset
gain experience
expand knowledge
acquire
develop
employment prospects
participate
contribute
job market
seek
apply for
opportunities
gain valuable insights
explore
unemployment rate
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set up
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establish
start a business
self-employment
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The use of social media, such as Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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