You want to book a hotel recomended to you for a family holiday at the seaside.

Dear Sir or Madam I

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letter

find

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you in radiant health and the best of spirit. I am writing

this

letter with

crucial

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purpose of asking about I want to book your

hotel

. So

this

week

my

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brithday

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birthday

.

For

this

reason

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I want to my family and close friends. On the one hand first and important thing ,I

hope

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get some information so that I can book our stay there. My friend who has recommended

this

hotel

for

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me.Told me a lot of hottels'

address

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, but I

choose

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your

hotel

.I

hope

this

hotel

very

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comfortable and

cozy

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.Because we are a lot of people. My parents,my husband , my

childrens

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children

children's

and me 2 close friends.

However

, I am planning to visit during

this

weeks

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. I

had

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also

like to enjoy that famous horse race which takes every year.

Besides

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also

like for you

take

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me to the open street market

while

I am there. So I

hope

to see you soon!