You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
picture represent
the amount of Change the verb form
represents
revenue
sources and expenditures of a USA Charity in the year of
2016. These two pie charts reflect that donated food accounted for the biggest Change preposition
apply
revenue
source, contributing 86,5
% of all revenues. Correct your spelling
86.5
Program
services accounted for the
most of the expenditure with 95,8% of all outgoings.
The other categories indicated Correct article usage
apply
much
smaller percentage. Community contributions, who were the second largest source of Correct article usage
a much
revenue
, only brought in 10,4% of overall
charts. The following sources had almost
insignificant impact on Add an article
an almost
overall
revenue
, such
as program
revenue
(2,2%), investment income (0,2%), government grants (0,2%), and other income (0,4%).
There are only two expenditure categories besides
program
services, such
as fundraising (2,6%) and management and general (1,6%) respectively. In conclusion, total
income sources they generated (53.561.580 US dollars) Correct article usage
the total
had
surpassed Unnecessary verb
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total
expenditures they spent (53.224.896 US dollars). Donated food and community contributions alone could cover all of the Correct article usage
the total
program
services budget.Submitted by maukaburtubel on
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