We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to realize so much on computers? Right at least 250 words.

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no doubt that technology is developing at a fast pace these days, where a large number of the populace's

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done on a computer.

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movement will lead to the explosive release of

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and the engagement of technology in our daily lives. In my opinion, I think that

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will have a bad impact on us if we are too focused on those tools. Considering the current situation, the increasing number of users may lead to a predictive high-technology consuming world, where all sorts of things will be involved with scientific

devices

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, a proportion of today's generation has swapped paper for their laptop or a display tablet if they are able to, as it is faster to just type in their notes,

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allow them to appear more professional in a workplace environment.

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, a laptop or a tablet can store all the important data in one go. Another example, an office meetings are held over the Internet service,

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of taking place in person like back in the day. It is convenient to be able to propose an urgent meetup with a group of people from any place. Despite all the satisfying outcomes, electronic

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have their own negative effect. Spending too much

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in front of a computer can cause serious

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issues like an individual's mental

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, people are used to only

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work

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for 8 hours per day to now being overly consumed by the use of

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high-end

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for more than just their

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assignments.

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, they spend less

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outdoors,

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also

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do not take the

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to do exercises.

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,

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has led to an unhealthy state of mind. Alike to the conducted study in concern

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mental

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, majority of the people's brains are affected by the excessive use of the internet via

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as phones and computers. In conclusion, I think in the future will be heavily involved with technology, whether it's for

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purposes or personal purposes

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as taking notes, cooking, and cleaning houses, etc. As well-developed as it sounds, these

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could harm us if we use them without limiting the

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and the usage intention properly, especially

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our

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