We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to realize so much on computers? Right at least 250 words.

There's no doubt that technology is developing at a fast pace these days, where a large number of the populace's work is done on a computer.

This

movement will lead to the explosive release of

devices

and the engagement of technology in our daily lives in the future. In my opinion, I think that

this

will have a bad impact on us if we are too focused on those tools. Considering the current situation, the increasing number of users may lead to a predictive high-technology consuming world, where all sorts of things will be involved with scientific

devices

.

For instance

, a proportion of today's generation has swapped paper for their laptop or a display tablet if they are able to, as it is faster to just type in their notes,

as well as

the tools allow them to appear more professional in a workplace environment.

Moreover

, a laptop or a tablet can store all the important data in one go. Despite all the satisfying outcomes, electronic

devices

have their own negative effect. Spending too much

time

in front of a computer can cause serious

health

issue

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like an individual's mental

health

.

For example

, people are used to only working for 8 hours per day to now being overly consumed by the use of high-end

devices

for more than just their job assignments.

Therefore

, they spend less

time

outdoors,

while

also

do not take the

time

to do exercises.

As a result

,

this

has led to an unhealthy state of mind,

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the conducted study concerning mental

health

, majority of the people's brains are affected by the excessive use of the internet via

devices

such

as phones and computers. In conclusion, I think the future will be heavily involved with technology, whether it's for work purposes or personal purposes

such

as taking notes, cooking,

and

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cleaning houses, etc. As well-developed as it sounds,

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could harm us if we use

them

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without limiting the

time

and the usage intention properly, especially for our

health

.