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The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers.
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This
 table shows the comparison of the number of native
language
speakers
 and the number of
speakers
 who
use
 the
language
 as
additoinal
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additional
. Table compared six languages
such
 as Mandarin
Chine
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Chinese
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,
Hindi
, Spanish,
English
, Arabic and Portuguese.
Overall
, Mandarin
chines
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Chinese
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 is the highest
use
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language
among
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in
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this
 chart ,
while
 Portuguese
is
Verb problem
has
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 the lowest usage
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of lanuguage
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lanuguage
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language
. 900
million
of
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apply
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users speak
Mandarine Chines
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Mandarin Chinese
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 as
native
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their native
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language
,
in addition
 to that,190
milliion
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million
use
Mandarine
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Mandarin
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 Chinese as
an
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a
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sencond
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second
language
.
Hindi
 is the second highest
language
 in
this
 table and 120
million
 speak
Hindi
 as their next
speach
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speech
.
English
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The English
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language
 has
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a different
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different
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a different
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 trend in
this
 chart, most people
use
English
 as
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a second
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second
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a second
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speach
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speech
 (603
million
)
while
 the native
English
speakers
 are less (339
million
).
Highest
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The highest
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 second
language
 is
English
while
portuguese
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Portuguese
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 is the lowest
addtional
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additional
language
speakers
use
 in
this
 chart.
Hindi
, Spanish,
English
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and English
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 number of native
speakers
closely
Add a missing verb
are closely
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 equal.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words language, speakers, use, hindi, english, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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