Today, people are buying more consumer goods lik ejwelry and household appliances. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, some
people
tend to purchase consumer stuff
for example
jewelry
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jewellery
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and household equipment.
This
essay will demonstrate about merits and demerits of consuming secondary
goods
.
Firstly
, I will explain the positive aspects and will be followed by the negative aspects explanation. On the one hand, buying
this
kind of
products
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product
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could make
person
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a person
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feel happy for a
while
.
People
think that
by
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buying
jewelry
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jewellery
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and household appliances, it gives them
spark
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a spark
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of happiness when they
are owning
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own
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and
using
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it
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them
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.
For example
, my friend always
go
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to shopping
secondary
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for secondary
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things every week as her way to escape from stressing day after finishing
week
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the week
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task.
In addition
, she said that after buying some consumer
goods
, she feels
relax
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and a bit happier than before.
Thus
,
by
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using these things could help her to release her stress.
On the other hand
,
this
growing trend is
impacted to
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the financial condition. It's because some products are
categories
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categorised
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as
an
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apply
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expensive
goods
. Some
people
would spend more money from their
saving
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savings
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only to buy unessential
need
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needs
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.
For instance
, my other friends who
are
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love to collect
jewellry
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jewellery
had financial difficulties when
emergency
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an emergency
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accident
happen
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. The hospital bill was much higher than
his
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amount of her savings,
then
she could not get the best maintenance.
For
this
reason, over-consumption habits can negatively affect
people
's financial well-being in certain
situation
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situations
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.
To sum up
, tertiery
goods
product expenses could bring positive emotions, but
it
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they
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also
impacted to
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negative drawbacks on financial stability especially when something major happens and you need a lot of money to solve. The disadvantages were higher than the positive impacts. In my view, it is better to spend the money wisely.
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