The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.

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The pie charts

illustrates

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in percentage in terms of Canada

USA

and UK of the ownerships of various cars in 2015.

Car

ownership

in the

USA

was dominated in 2015 by Volkswagen, Ford, General

Motors

and Renault. These four

car

companies

has

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covered almost 50%.

Furthermore

BMW – mini, PSA. And Hyundai has covered nearly 21% of

car

ownership

in the

USA

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FCA has

take

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up 33%

car

ownership

in the

USA

Finally

Jaguar

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% and as the smallest percentage Honda has covered 2.2% of the

car

ownership

. And

them

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Canada’s

car

ownership

showed

smiliraties

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similarities

to the

USA’s

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USA

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with General

Motors

and Ford

Moto

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Motor

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company accounting for a

concidarable

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considerable

market share of over 30% in total. Toyota

Motors

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coparation

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corporation

cooperation

separation

and FCA /

Chruysler

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Chrysler

holds

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the second place

nearly

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15% each. Ten other

car

ownerships

makes

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make

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just

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50% of the market share.

Along with

Honda

Motors

, Nissan

Motors

, Hyundai – Kia ,

volkswagonand

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Volkswagen and

Volkswagon and

other

varities

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varieties

Finally

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car

ownership

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the UK

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was similar to

USA’s

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and Canada’s with the most significant difference being that

Hyundai-kia

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the Hyundai-kia

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accounter of 11.2%

conciderably

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considerably

higher than

USA’s

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the USA’s

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and Canada’s . The

perecentage

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percentage

of Mazda

carownership

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car ownership

car-ownership

also

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significanly

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significantly

high in the UK which covered 3.9%,

while

1.8% in Canada and no representation in the

USA

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, car, ownership, motors with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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