The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.

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The pie charts

illustrates

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in percentage in terms of Canada

USA

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and UK of the ownerships of various cars in 2015.

Car

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ownership

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in the

USA

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was dominated in 2015 by Volkswagen, Ford, General

Motors

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and Renault. These four

car

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companies

has

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covered almost 50%.

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BMW – mini, PSA. And Hyundai has covered nearly 21% of

car

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ownership

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in the

USA

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FCA has

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up 33%

car

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ownership

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in the

USA

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Jaguar

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% and as the smallest percentage Honda has covered 2.2% of the

car

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ownership

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. And

them

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Canada’s

car

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ownership

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showed

smiliraties

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similarities

to the

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USA’s

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with General

Motors

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and Ford

Moto

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Motor

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company accounting for a

concidarable

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considerable

market share of over 30% in total. Toyota

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Motors

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coparation

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corporation

cooperation

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and FCA /

Chruysler

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Chrysler

holds

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the second place

nearly

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15% each. Ten other

car

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ownerships

makes

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just

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50% of the market share.

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Honda

Motors

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, Nissan

Motors

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, Hyundai – Kia ,

volkswagonand

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Volkswagen and

Volkswagon and

other

varities

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varieties

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Finally

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car

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ownership

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the UK

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was similar to

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USA’s

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and Canada’s with the most significant difference being that

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the Hyundai-kia

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accounter of 11.2%

conciderably

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considerably

higher than

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USA’s

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the USA’s

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and Canada’s . The

perecentage

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percentage

of Mazda

carownership

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car ownership

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also

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was also

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significanly

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significantly

high in the UK which covered 3.9%,

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1.8% in Canada and no representation in the

USA

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, car, ownership, motors with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
29
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

208 words

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