Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move regional areas outside large urban centres. To sing the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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the number of people who prefer to see big

companies

and industries in

countryside

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far from

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center

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increased significantly,

although

there are several advantages of

location

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the location

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of these

companies

in

area

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of districts, it can have some disadvantages as well. I will try to discuss both

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and negative

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of

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and draw a conclusion. On the one

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relocate

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large

companies

and

factories

to

countryside

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have

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a

lot

of impact. A primary advantage of moving these

companies

far from

cities

is that the amount of air pollution and noise

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in towns.

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example

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this

type of

companies

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consume

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a

lot

of fossil

fuels

in

manufacturing

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the manufacturing

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of goods and they release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. There

for

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the quality of air in

cities

will be good. Another benefit of

this

,

the

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rate of traffic

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decreased.

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is because

,

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big lorries and

other type

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of

transports

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distribute a

lot

of raw materials and goods to

factories

.

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, the number of transport will be more

at

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narrow roads of

cities

and will

be collapse

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there

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positive of relocating

factories

and

companies

to regional areas. One of the major

drawback

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of it is that

,

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the price of the products grow up.

For instance

, big

companies

consume much more

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than residents of these areas,

therefore

, they should distribute

fuels

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themselves.

Moreover

, delivery of products

take

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more time and additional

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for trucks. Another important

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demerit is that

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suffer

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from these

companies

. The reason for

this

is that

,

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there are a

lot

of waste products which could be harmful

for

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wild animals and soil. In conclusion,

while

relocating big

companies

and

factories

in areas of district far from

cities

can offer several positives, there may be some drawbacks too. From my personal point of view

advantages

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the advantages

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of it will outweigh the disadvantages