The chart below show the numbers of people per household in 1990 and 2000 in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts below display the number of individuals per house in New Zealand in the years 1990 and 2000
Overall
, two people
in each household had the biggest market share
in 1990. While
the share
of 1 person and 3 people
will continue to be significant, and with 4 people
will remain relatively stable, the others will fall to minimal levels.
In 1990 houses with 2 people
had nearly a third of the overall
share
, and this
proportion was maintained in 2000, but it fell to be the second biggest portion. The next highest part, is the one with 3 people
, with over a fifth in 1990, and it is predicted to rise and become the largest portion with 35% of the market share
in 2000.
Households with 4 people
began with 17% but decreased by 1% compared with the first chart. In 1990 families with 5 and 6 people
had the lowest proportion with 8% and 6% respectively. In 2000, while
houses with 5 people
increased to 13%, the ones with 6 people
it is projected to almost disappear with only 3%. Finally
, one person is set to become the biggest loser with a loss of 15% from 17% to 2%.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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