The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The described diagram delineates

inofrmation

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information

related to how

cheese

is made on

large

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scale. Looking from an

overall

perspective, it is readily apparent that during

cheese

production,

milk

will undergo 9 steps, process

commence

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with

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the solification

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solification

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solidification

notification

of acidified

milk

and cutting them

in

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into

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smaller pieces, followed by heating and draining and ends with shaping, storing and packaging.

Cheese

production starts with acidification, in which raw

milk

and

baceria

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bacteria

are added. With the support of some enzymes,

this

milk

will be converted to curds,

process

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is

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apply

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Known as solidification.

this

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This

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soldified

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solidified

modified

milk

, will be

cutted

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cut

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down

in

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into

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smaller pieces. These small segments will

then

be heated

in addition

of

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to

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draining, in which excess water will be removed. Salt is added

in

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to

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leftovers and

further

processed for shaping. After shaping is done,

this

is processed for storage and fermentation for

next

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the next

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two months. After two months

cheese

is operated for packaging, and transported to local shops or markets.