The charts showed us the data about two genres of TV shows watched by males and females in four different age groups in Australia.

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information about two genres of TV programmes watched by female and male viewers and four various

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groups in Australia.

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the chart, we can see that women tend to watch

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shows more than men, but the

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of women who watch

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game

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games

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is slightly less than men's.

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, the bar charts show us that the

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of the

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group

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above 45

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reality

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shows almost as many as

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shows making it very similar to the

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of the

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between 16 and 24 where 51% of viewers are the same in

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both bar charts.

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, the remaining

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groups'

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differenciates

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differentiates

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, the

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of 25-34 watch

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shows considerably more than

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shows.

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, the

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group

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of 35-44 watch

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shows significantly less than

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shows.