The charts showed us the data about two genres of TV shows watched by males and females in four different age groups in Australia.
The bar charts
provides
information about two genres of TV programmes watched by female and male viewers and four various Change the verb form
provide
age
groups in Australia.
By
the chart, we can see that women tend to watch Change preposition
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reality
shows more than men, but the percentage
of women who watch game
is slightly less than men's.
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games
Also
, the bar charts show us that the percentage
of the age
group
above 45 watch
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watches
reality
shows almost as many as game
shows making it very similar to the percentage
of the age
group
between 16 and 24 where 51% of viewers are the same in the
both bar charts.
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However
, the remaining age
groups' percentage
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percentages
differenciates
dramatically, Correct your spelling
differentiates
for example
, the age
group
of 25-34 watch reality
shows considerably more than game
shows. Whereas
, the age
group
of 35-44 watch game
shows significantly less than reality
shows.Submitted by dnm.best on
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