The maps below ahow an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons when relevant.

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The map below enumerates

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the

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commerical

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commercial

enterprise in the town of

Norbiton

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and the idea of evolving it in the future. The industrial

area

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Norbiton

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now has a larger number of

factories

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seggregrated

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separated

away from the town . A

river

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lies between the farmland and the

area

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consisting of the

factories

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. In the upcoming days, it is planned to change the factory

area

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into a housing unit with enough amenities for the people. New roads are

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planned to be developed across the

river

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to an additional

accomodation

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accommodation

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the

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apply

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present,

Norbiton

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comprises

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a large

areadesignated

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area designated

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especially

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for

factories

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. The farmland across the

river

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is of no use now and the

river

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flows from west to east parallel to the industries. The town is located perpendicular to the

factories

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the west. In the future, huge changes are planned to be done in the

Norbiton

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area

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, the industrial

are

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area

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will be transformed into an

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for houses that

accomodate

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accommodate

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a large

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large

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number of people . In

additon

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addition

to that, basic human requirements are

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taken into consideration and new shops, medical

centre

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centres

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playground

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and schools are discussed to

constructed

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in the society that can be easily accessed by the locals. The new roads will

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be developed towards the

river

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that

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will lead to extra homes for people.

Individuals

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homes are

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planned to be constructed on the

farm land

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farmland

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in the future. In the upcoming days, more importance will be given to roads and transportation. So, new junctions will be

constrcuted

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constructed

to ensure sustainable and safe transportation for the population living in that

area

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words norbiton, area, factories, river with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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2
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

267 words

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