The maps below ahow an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons when relevant.

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he

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the

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commerical

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commercial

enterprise in the town of

Norbiton

and the idea of evolving it in the future. The industrial

area

in

Norbiton

now has a larger number of

factories

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separated

away from the town . A

river

lies between the farmland and the

area

consisting of the

factories

. In the upcoming days, it is planned to change the factory

area

into a housing unit with enough amenities for the people. New roads are

also

planned to be developed across the

river

to an additional

accomodation

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accommodation

.

In

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the

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present,

Norbiton

comprises

of

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a large

areadesignated

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area designated

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especially

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for

factories

. The farmland across the

river

is of no use now and the

river

flows from west to east parallel to the industries. The town is located perpendicular to the

factories

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the west. In the future, huge changes are planned to be done in the

Norbiton

area

.

Firstly

, the industrial

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area

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will be transformed into an

area

for houses that

accomodate

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accommodate

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large

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number of people . In

additon

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addition

to that, basic human requirements are

also

taken into consideration and new shops, medical

centre

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centres

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,

playground

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playgrounds

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and schools are discussed to

constructed

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in the society that can be easily accessed by the locals. The new roads will

also

be developed towards the

river

that

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will lead to extra homes for people.

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homes are

also

planned to be constructed on the

farm land

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farmland

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in the future. In the upcoming days, more importance will be given to roads and transportation. So, new junctions will be

constrcuted

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constructed

to ensure sustainable and safe transportation for the population living in that

area

.