Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age of five or six, right up until the age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

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system has
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increasing popularity among schools, beginning
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early age and ending up
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adult age.
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feelings of self-confidence is the main advantage,
while
a high level of stress
due to
failing is the disadvantage of
this
system After doing a good job, which requires a huge amount of power and hard work, people often feel relieved and proud of themselves. The same is with
exams
and
tests
; students spend nights and days preparing for the finals, learning complicated topics and solving some problems, and , after getting a good mark, they realize that all hard work pays off and, at
this
point, a
harmon
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hormone
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called endorphin is released. Recently, I have read research about developing self-confidence and the main suggestions were taking
tests
and solving math problems.
However
, the final
tests
and
exams
are one of the most stressful periods in
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life
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This
high level of anxiety is
due to
the possibility of failing
as well as
being a disappointment in
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parents
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eyes. Students used to leave everything at the
last
minute and,
as a result
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to learn all 20 topics in the
last
two days, sacrificing healthy sleep and
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diet. In our
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there was a girl who had a period of fainting because of lack of sleep and stress relating to preparation for
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future
exams
.
To conclude
, the
tests
and
exams
have their own advantages,
such
as
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up
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confidence, if prepared for them properly( without sleep debts and using
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time-management
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).
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