The pie chart below shows the frequency of U.S Adults’ online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preference. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of U.S
adults
who purchasing
goods in online Wrong verb form
purchased
shop
in 2015, Fix the agreement mistake
shops
while
the bar chart depicts the percentages of shopping preference
by U.S Fix the agreement mistake
preferences
adults
in online and physical store
. Fix the agreement mistake
stores
Overall
, adults
’ people
in Correct article usage
the U.S
U.S
frequently Correct your spelling
U.S.
purchased
things in online Wrong verb form
purchase
shop
less often than Fix the agreement mistake
shops
people
who were
never Unnecessary verb
apply
shop
online, while
adults
prefer purchased
Change the verb form
to purchase
in
physical Correct pronoun usage
them in
store
rather than buy Fix the agreement mistake
stores
it
in online Correct pronoun usage
them
shop
.
Fix the agreement mistake
shops
To begin
, U.S
Correct your spelling
U.S.
adults
’ people
in 2015 had the highest percentage on
spending Change preposition
of
the
money less often at 37%. Correct article usage
apply
Then
, the habits of people
who purchased a few times a month at 28%, while
15% purchased weekly in online shop
. Interestingly, there were 20% of U.S Fix the agreement mistake
shops
adults
who never purchased in
online Correct your spelling
an
shop
.
Next,
it looks like adults
Change the noun form
adult
people
in US
prefer to less buy frequently in Correct article usage
the US
online
Add an article
the online
an online
shop
, it reached approximately 83%. It Fix the agreement mistake
shops
followed
by the percentages of all online Add a missing verb
was followed
shoppers
, monthly online shoppers
, and weekly shoppers
that had around 65%, 55%, and 37% respectively. Even thought
, physical online dominated the entire trend Correct your spelling
though
but
online Correct word choice
apply
shop
was the highest in weekly online Replace the word
shopping
shoppers
(61%).Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, shop, people, shoppers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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