the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison.

The chart depicts the number of

goods

Use synonyms

that

transported

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were transported

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in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four

kind

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kinds

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transportations

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transportation

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which were road, water, rail

dan

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and

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pipeline.

overall

Linking Words

, road transportation could send the most

goods

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compared to the others,

while

Linking Words

pipeline

Correct article usage

the pipeline

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method showed the least

goods

Use synonyms

that were transported. From the

begining

Correct your spelling

beginning

road

Correct article usage

the road

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system

already

Rephrase

apply

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started to transport more

that

Correct word choice

than

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millions

Fix the agreement mistake

million

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tonnes of

goods

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which

were

Correct subject-verb agreement

was

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the highest compared to other

methodes

Correct your spelling

methods

and reached

it's

Replace the word

its

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peak in 2002. in comparison,

railway

Correct article usage

the railway

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mode could transfer things relatively the same each year from 1974 to 2002 which were around 40 million tonnes despite

showed

Wrong verb form

showing

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some decline in the

midle

Correct your spelling

middle

Additionally

Linking Words

, products that were sent by waterway appeared

increasing

Change the verb form

to increase

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every year from 1974 to 2002 except

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for a

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slight dip in 1998. By far comparison, pipeline metode started low in 1974 and gradually increased its number to their highest products in 1982 to 1990.

Altough

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Although

after that, they showed a slight decrease in

numbes

Correct your spelling

numbers

number

from 1994 to 2002.

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Oct 14, 2023

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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

166 words

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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