the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.

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The chart depicts the number of

goods

Use synonyms

that

transported

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were transported

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in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four

kind

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kinds

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transportations

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transportation

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which were road, water, rail

dan

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and

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pipeline.

overall

Linking Words

, road transportation could send the most

goods

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compared to the others,

while

Linking Words

pipeline

Correct article usage

the pipeline

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method showed the least

goods

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that were transported. From the

begining

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beginning

road

Correct article usage

the road

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system

already

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apply

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started to transport more

that

Correct word choice

than

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millions

Fix the agreement mistake

million

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tonnes of

goods

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which

were

Correct subject-verb agreement

was

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the highest compared to other

methodes

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methods

and reached

it's

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its

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peak in 2002. in comparison,

railway

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the railway

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mode could transfer things relatively the same each year from 1974 to 2002 which were around 40 million tonnes despite

showed

Wrong verb form

showing

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some decline in the

midle

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middle

Additionally

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, products that were sent by waterway appeared

increasing

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to increase

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every year from 1974 to 2002 except

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for a

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slight dip in 1998. By far comparison, pipeline metode started low in 1974 and gradually increased its number to their highest products in 1982 to 1990.

Altough

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Although

after that, they showed a slight decrease in

numbes

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numbers

number

from 1994 to 2002.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

166 words

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