Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

A matter of considerable controversy at present is the issue of whether many individuals express a strong preference for becoming self-employed rather than working under someone.

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essay will establish the causes alongside some undesired drawbacks of

this

contemporary movement. I take the view that taking charge of one’s own business appears to be

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preferable for the majority of

people

due to

several compelling reasons.

Firstly

, proprietorship brings out golden opportunities for

people

who might become weary of heavy

workload

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, unsocial working hours,

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and unfair

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treatment under the supervision of demanding senior managers. Indeed, embarking on a self-employed career means that

people

can relish their sense of freedom and achieve a good work-life balance.

Secondly

, the prospect of being conducive to mastering new skills,

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and fully developing untapped potentials is

also

one of

contributing

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factors to

this

trend.

Along with

striving to become their own boss, individuals will unavoidably have to enhance both their hard and soft skills like

problem solving

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, critical thinking, dependability, etc. to a greater extent as a requirement of leadership qualities and success achievement.

Although

it is unquestionably appealing to gain recognition as a proprietor, possible obstacles

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self-employment can not be disregarded. In fact, in

this

highly competitive world,

people

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shun the likelihood of challenging hurdles and being doomed to failure when acquiring a job of their preference, especially young entrepreneurs who lack

experiences

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experience

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and insights and are prone to make unpremeditated decisions.

Additionally

, in the attempt to stay the course, new start-ups would struggle to seek investment and take loans from the bank,

hence

, new entrepreneurs have to

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tremendous effort and dedication

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their work which might produce physical and mental health problems. In reality, there are countless cases of self-employed

people

who are immersed in

debts

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, stuck with mental illness and not able to move forward. All things considered,

while

many

people

state their preference for self-employment as a privilege to improve their leadership skills and act on their own will,

disadvantages

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of it should be taken into account as independent workers may undergo financial hardships and mental health dysfunction.