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The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the adjustments
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 town
Felixstone
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of Felixstone
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 experienced from 1967 until 2001.
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, over the period the city became more modernised and tourism oriented. In the upper and lower parts of the town were added new recreation areas and various entertaining facilities. The most noticeable modification is the replacement of farmland
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 a major amusement zone with a hotel, swimming pool and a few tennis courts.
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, the shops on the right side of the high street were demolished with
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 development of a living sector.
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, only the golf course, at the left corner of the map, survived the upper-town renovations. Other considerable transformations were made in the lower part of
Felixstone
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Felixstowe
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 as a knocking-down of a fish market, pier and marina, followed by
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construction of an enormous beach area, divided into two parts. As regards
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 hotel, it was completely modernised with
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 addition of a car park.
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, the dunes in the right lower corner were left almost untouched, with the wind turbines being added.

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