the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp

arison. write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the number of goods transported in the UK , by 4 different transport ways: on roads, on water ,on rails and through pipelines. The units are measured in million
tonnes
.
Overall
,
while
the number of products transported on roads, on water and through pipelines has increased, the number of objects transported on rail fluctuated , but it was the same in 2002 as in 1974. Starting with the method of transport that has developed the most, road delivery started with about 70 million kilograms of goods transported in 1974 ,it increased steadily until 2002 , reaching just under 100
tonnes
transported in
this
way, and being the most popular method of delivering.
Also
, the pipeline encountered an increase in the kilograms of products transported through them, starting from less than 10 in 1974 , and reaching 20
tonnes
in 2002. Continuing ,water transport has gained popularity over the period,beginning with 40
tonnes
, and ending with over 60
tonnes
. The only method of good delivery that has variated insignificantly through the period was that on railways,starting from 40 kilograms, fluctuating a bit and
then
reaching 40
tonnes
again in 2002.
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