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More and more plastic waste is polluting the world’s city, countryside and ocean. What problems will it cause? What measures should be taken to solve these problems?

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I strongly believe that
this
 academy is best suited for me because
this
university
established
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since
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 1828 and
one
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 of the oldest
university
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of
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in
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UK
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.
This
university
is
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 received 5 QS stars in excellent
for
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facilities
, the various
facilities
provide
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 by
this
university
such
 as 3D scanning,
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 manufacturing laboratory,
Advanced
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an Advanced
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 composites workshop,
Advertising
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 studio,
Aerospace
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 workshop,
Alston
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 observatory, Analytical laboratories and many more. Even though
,
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 all the information provided on the
university
 website is very clear
therefore
 everyone can understand it very easily.
Additionally
,
this
academy
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 vision is very clear that
institution
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delivering
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 excellence in research and knowledge exchange.
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,
work
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 your
university
engage
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 in will bring about social,
economics
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, cultural and academic impact in collaboration with national and global communities, and place public and private organizations.
This
university
run
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 various subjects like accounting and finance, aerospace engineering, archaeology, architecture, art, design and fashion, astronomy and many more which is very useful for any international student. Meanwhile,
this
 institute is 3rd in the
north west
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 in
2023
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 national student survey
give
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 positive feedback and
also
provide
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 some
facilities
 like
lowest
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 cost of living, medical
facilities
, affordable accommodation and future planning.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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