The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The floor plan compares the setting of a public
library
in the past and present.
Overall
, more facilities are added. An amount
of traditional Change the quantifier
A number
books
have been removed but
replaced with new technology. Correct word choice
and
It is clear that
many things have changed from the past and present floor plan
.
Two decades ago, the central Fix the agreement mistake
plans
library
had 5 sections of books
: the
children’s Correct article usage
apply
books
on
the top right Change preposition
in
corner
, below was the
adult’s Correct article usage
apply
non-fictions
, magazines and Correct your spelling
non-fiction
newspaper
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newspapers
on
the bottom left Change preposition
in
corner
, and adults’s fictions
above the reading Fix the agreement mistake
fiction
section
. There was
tables and chairs in the middle of the Change the verb form
were
library
. An enquiry desk was situated on
the bottom right Change preposition
in
corner
. There was also
a computer section
on
the top left Change preposition
in
corner
.
It is clear that
the central library
has changed considerably. However
the 4 main corners are still occupied but modified. On the top left Add a comma
However,
corner
,the section
consists of a story telling
area and children’s Correct your spelling
storytelling
fictions
with some sofas. The reference Fix the agreement mistake
fiction
books
section
is above the computer section
on bottom
left Add an article
the bottom
corner
. The lecture room is placed on
the top right Change preposition
in
corner
. Opposite to it is the cafe which is below an information desk and adult’s
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adult
fictions
. The entrance hall is clear for more space.Fix the agreement mistake
fiction
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