Some people think that interview is not reliable method of choosing whom to employ. there is other methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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rapidly changing employment landscape,

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recruited

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workers in many ways. Some people

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a very Convenient method to choose

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argue that there are some other methods which should considered.

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there are lots of benefits to

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workers. First of all, it provides

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they approach every

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get a chance to observe his attitude,

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interaction,

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punctuality, intelligence of presentation.

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helpful

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recruit the night person who

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companies

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economic growth and

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well-being.

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method

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to examine the night person to recruit in

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asserts that

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a better employee by taking practical skill test,

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test.

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employees

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he or she better fit or not for

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company

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ways to recruit a person for a

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that considering

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to select an employee should not be a prudent approach, there are

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companies

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task achievement

The essay does not fully address the task. It is important to clearly state the extent to which you agree or disagree in the introduction. Additionally, the ideas presented in the body paragraphs lack clarity and coherence.

coherence cohesion

The essay lacks a clear and logical structure. Each paragraph should have a clear topic sentence and provide supporting details. The ideas presented should be organized in a logical manner.

lexical resource

The essay lacks variety in vocabulary. Try to use a wider range of words and phrases to express your ideas.

grammatical range accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the essay. Pay attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and word order.

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Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

251 words

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Some people think that interview is not reliable method of choosing whom to employ. there is other methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Fully explain your ideas

Some cities ban private cars from entering the centre and force people to use bicycles and buses. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, owning a home rether than renting one is very important for people

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?

In many countries, people are not looking care of their elderly relatives but seeking help of professionals to look after them. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?