You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. Najafi
I am Mr. Zare who lives in your rental apartment. In fact, my family and I have lived there for 5 years.
Our apartment number is 12 on the first floor of Oak apartment on Alavi Street whose postcode is NY457
Actually, I am writing
this
letter because we have a majority of problems with some furniture, such
as refrigerator, stove and air conditioning system. At first,
the stove has lost two fire places
for 3 months. Correct your spelling
fireplaces
In addition
, the door of refrigerator
does not close correctly and needs to Add an article
the refrigerator
keep
closed with pressure. Wrong verb form
be kept
Finally
, and the main reason that I have decided to write to you about the air conditioner, trully
it works with a loud harmful sound and Correct your spelling
truly
also
water
the building's roof and probably Change the verb form
waters
damade
Correct your spelling
damages
ceiling
. so our neighbours reported Correct article usage
the ceiling
to
the police and the police accepted their fault and just will have one week rest to second awareness to fix it.
Correct pronoun usage
it to
As a result
, we would need enough money to solve its problem. If we do not act for the police sign, not only have to give payment, but also
maybe the council will order us to close our home.
Your
Sincerely,
Mr. ZareCorrect the word
Yours
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