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the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.

the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.
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The given line graph illustrates the
goods
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 transport methods
had
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apply
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use
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used
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 in
UK
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the UK
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 from 1974 to 2002. They have used four transport methods for delivering
goods
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such
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 as road, water, rail and pipeline.
Overall
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, every delivery
methods
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method
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 had
upward
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an upward
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 trend over the given period except rail and rail was the highest used transport system in
this
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 period.
Pipeline
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The pipeline
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 was the
lowest
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most
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 used delivery system in the UK, in 1974, less than 10
million
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tones
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 of
goods
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delivered
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were delivered
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 by pipeline and
then
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 it gradually increased to 30
million
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tones
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 in 1982, after that
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the pipline
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pipline
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pipeline
 delivered
the
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a
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 stable amount of
goods
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untill
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until
 1990.
In contrast
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, the road is the most famous method in the UK for delivering
goods
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. In 1974, it was around 70
million
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tones
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tonnes
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 and
then
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 over the period it fluctuated
70
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from 70
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 to 90
million
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tones
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tonnes
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 and
finally
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, it
has
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apply
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stopped
in
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at
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 around 90
million
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tones
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tonnes
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 in 2002.
However
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, water was
second
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the second
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 most used method, it
was
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apply
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started
around
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at around
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 40
milliion
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million
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tones
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tonnes
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 in 1974 and after 1982, it showed
the
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a
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 stable movement till 1994 and after 1994 it showed
quick
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a quick
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 drop and again in 1998 it started to increase.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, million, tones with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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