the graph below shows the quantities of goods tansported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four modes of transport. summarize the information, and make a comp arison. write at least 150 words.
The given line graph illustrates the
goods
transport methods had
Verb problem
apply
use
in Change the verb form
used
UK
from 1974 to 2002. They have used four transport methods for delivering Correct article usage
the UK
goods
such
as road, water, rail and pipeline.
Overall
, every delivery methods
had Fix the agreement mistake
method
upward
trend over the given period except rail and rail was the highest used transport system in Correct article usage
an upward
this
period.
Pipeline
was the Add an article
The pipeline
lowest
used delivery system in the UK, in 1974, less than 10 Correct your spelling
most
million
tones
of goods
delivered
by pipeline and Add a missing verb
were delivered
then
it gradually increased to 30 million
tones
in 1982, after that Correct article usage
the pipline
pipline
delivered Correct your spelling
pipeline
the
stable amount of Correct article usage
a
goods
untill
1990. Correct your spelling
until
In contrast
, the road is the most famous method in the UK for delivering goods
. In 1974, it was around 70 million
tones
and Correct your spelling
tonnes
then
over the period it fluctuated 70
to 90 Change preposition
from 70
million
tones
and Correct your spelling
tonnes
finally
, it has
stopped Unnecessary verb
apply
in
around 90 Change preposition
at
million
tones
in 2002.
Correct your spelling
tonnes
However
, water was second
most used method, it Correct article usage
the second
was
started Unnecessary verb
apply
around
40 Change preposition
at around
milliion
Correct your spelling
million
tones
in 1974 and after 1982, it showed Correct your spelling
tonnes
the
stable movement till 1994 and after 1994 it showed Correct article usage
a
quick
drop and again in 1998 it started to increase.Correct article usage
a quick
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