The three pie charts show the production, consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world.

The three pie charts show the production, consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of coffee production and consumption in different countries, and
also
where the profit is directed.
Overall
,
while
the biggest consumption of caffeine is made in Europe, most of the production is made in South Africa.
Moreover
, the largest part of the profit is distributed to the delivery team.
Firstly
, in terms of coffee consumption, most of it is consumed by individuals from Europe, representing 41% of caffeine usage. In
this
category, the second place is taken by America , with 39%, and the
last
place is occupied by Japan, with 8%.
Secondly
, in terms of production, most of the coffee ,44%, is made in South Africa.
Additionally
, 18% is made in Japan, and 16% in Vietnam. The greatest percentage of the earnings is distributed to the delivery teams , 51%, and
then
to the retailers , 24%. The producers receive only 15% of all profit. The least amount of income is made by exporters, being only 10%.
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