30.In some countries many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

It is said that in some nations, students after ending high school will take a gap year for travelling or
working
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. The main benefits of
this
are gaining work experience and expanding knowledge;
however
, the key drawbacks are
people
may stop studying and think that
university
is not important. The main advantage is that individuals can get work experience. Doing a job will help
people
to know if they really like it, and if they want to do that job in the future. As well,
this
allows that in
a
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future, when changing to another company, to have priority since they have had a work before.
Furthermore
, travelling, allows
people
to understand and know more cultures and
people
so they are more open-minded. After visiting different countries, there may be a place that they really like, and want to live there in
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future,
this
will make students have motivation when studying at the
university
since they have a goal. Recent research concluded that in Spain, the
people
that
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have visited more countries are happier and more open
at
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accepting new things, and
as a consequence
have good
university
results.
However
, if too many trips are
done
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,
people
don’t have
mood
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to study, the only thing that they would like to do is to go to other places, and going to the
university
is something that
block
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them
to do
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what they want, it is a waste of time, and
as a
consequence
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they will dislike
university
. The great disadvantage of working in the gap year is that some
people
will leave
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studies.
This
is because they think that after 12 years of school, working is something new for them, they experienced new things and are not willing to go back to study, since they think that they are fine with the life they have. Studies done in the USA
shown
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that 80% of
people
that quit studying after high school, do not continue their studies. In conclusion, taking a sabbatical year will allow individuals to try different types of
works
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, looking for the one they like and they can learn new things.
However
, there is a possibility that they will not study again and
do
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not take
university
as something important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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