Some people think it is important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more importany to spend time with family and friends. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People opine that the majority of our schedules should be manifest on the brilliant

career

whilst some prefer to spend our moment with the closest

ones

. I believe that

invest

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on

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the

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career

performance is for

the

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better future. On the one hand, a person that

invest

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her

schedules

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schedule

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on

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in

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learning

is try

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is trying

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to

projecting

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a nice

career

and comfortable life later in future. She doesn't mind

to work

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a bit harder now, so she can enjoy the convenience later. She might think that the result of her

hardwork

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hard work

will make her

beloved

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loved

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ones

happy and she

want

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to treat all of them with money.

For example

, she

work

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all day and night to get a great retirement plan and to provide food or even a nice house for her family. She thinks it's

a

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best plan after all rather than

to

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allocate

majority

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the majority

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of her

time

on

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her family with less money.

On the other hand

, people have several

reason

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reasons

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to spend

time

with

closest

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their closest

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ones

. Mostly because they regret investing most of their

time

only on a job.

Furthermore

, they are now already old and trying so hard to get back the moment but their family member already left home. Some

also

think that a company won't value you as much as your family. The company can kick and replace a person in a minute, but family will always be there for you.

For instance

, if you are on sick leave

more

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than 3 months, the company will

initially

cut you off but the family will look you up and take care of you in your dark days.

To sum up

, the main focus of spending

time

on

career

development is to eventually achieve

the

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convenience.

However

, some individuals think that all the money will no longer

meaningful

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if they don't have the chance to have

another moments

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another moment

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with their

beloved

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loved

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ones

.