Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governaments to make it a legal requirement To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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polythene
and glass like
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western
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pollution. Most
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the
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householders
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return these products to recycle,
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people
think if there is a law
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regarding
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they will do it in a proper manner. I strongly believe we should have
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recycle
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prossece
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problem and protect our environment.
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, I agree with
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method for
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plastic
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product
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when the population is increasing
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usage
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rarely
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the
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people do not have
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a proper
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idea
how
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to throw
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away plastic
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but some countries have
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implement
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west recycle
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machines to throw
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west
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.
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households do not put
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their
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waste
in
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prooper
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proper
recycle bin,
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will be more dangerous in future.
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, if your kids have some biscuit packet when they
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the garden but after having it they do not want to throw it, they
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it where they sit. Sometimes, the reason will be they
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not aware
about
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it, authorities can arrange awareness
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programs
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council.
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, some
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we can not change,
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they
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obey when there is
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only.
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I strongly believe government can implement
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programm
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programme
for tax on
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west
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product
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but there should be
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proccess
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process
. That
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program
able
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to record how many recyle
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product
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you purchase and how many
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you
recycled
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then
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balance they can charge some tax.
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recycle
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process
has
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started
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time ago but
still
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it not running properly,
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,
government
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the government
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can start
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tax method,
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after
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they will encourage to throw
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the
procuct properly. In conclusion, plastic is more harmful
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our
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atmosphere
, if we
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continue
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very soon we can not live
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on
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earth. If you worry about your
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children
you have
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a responsibility
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to throw your
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properly but most
of
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the
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people
not
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follow
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, as a solution
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I believe
government
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the government
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can start
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a law
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for recycle
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about recycling
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products.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste management
  • recycling
  • legal framework
  • responsibility
  • accountability
  • penalties
  • compliance
  • deterrents
  • regulations
  • waste reduction
  • education
  • awareness programs
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