Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governaments to make it a legal requirement To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
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polythene
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people
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presence
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this
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, I agree with impliment
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.
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a prooper
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proper
this
will be more dangerous in future. For example
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of
programm
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programs
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as city
council.
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people
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if they
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a law
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I strongly believe government can implement Correct article usage
a programm
programm
for tax on Correct your spelling
programme
recycle
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product
but there should be Fix the agreement mistake
products
transparent
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a transparent
proccess
. That Correct your spelling
process
programm
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program
able
to record how many recyle Add a missing verb
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product
you purchase and how many Change to a plural noun
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government
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the government
this
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and after
this
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for
our Change the preposition
to
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atmosphere
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continue
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very soon we can not live in
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on
this
earth. If you worry about your childern
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children
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about recycling
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