The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.

The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.
The pie chart above illustrates the proportion of
favourite
restaurants type
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restaurant types
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that Canadians would love to take away
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menu between 1960 and 2015 in Canada. It can be clearly seen that the most
favourite
is Chinese food and there are three types that became least
favourite
was Japanese, Mexican and Greek Food. Chinese restaurants made 34% of Canadians come along to try their cuisine.
Moreover
,
India
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dishes became the second
favourite
at 26%.
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, even
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of
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Canadians like to take their dishes home, there are 11% that never take away from any type of restaurant. Italian and Persian had slightly the same percentage.
While
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menu scored 10%, Persian was only 1% below it. 3% chose Thai cuisine to be taken away.
Nevertheless
, the number among Japanese, Greek and Mexican
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are the same at 1% each. For the
rest
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4% would
chose
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the
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type of dish other than
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listed.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words favourite with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • favourite takeaways
  • people in Canada
  • number of Indian restaurants
  • 1960
  • 2015
  • types of takeaways
  • popular
  • 55 years
  • country
  • time frame
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