The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.
The pie chart above illustrates the proportion of
favourite
restaurants type
that Canadians would love to take away Fix the agreement mistake
restaurant types
the
menu between 1960 and 2015 in Canada.
It can be clearly seen that the most Change preposition
from the
favourite
is Chinese food and there are three types that became least favourite
was Japanese, Mexican and Greek Food.
Chinese restaurants made 34% of Canadians come along to try their cuisine. Moreover
, India
dishes became the second Replace the word
Indian
favourite
at 26%. However
, even most
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though most
of
Canadians like to take their dishes home, there are 11% that never take away from any type of restaurant.
Italian and Persian had slightly the same percentage. Change preposition
apply
While
Italian
menu scored 10%, Persian was only 1% below it. 3% chose Thai cuisine to be taken away. Correct article usage
the Italian
Nevertheless
, the number among Japanese, Greek and Mexican menu
are the same at 1% each. For the Fix the agreement mistake
menus
rest
4% would Add a comma
rest,
chose
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choose
the
type of dish other than Correct article usage
a
option
listed.Add an article
the option
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