Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because univerity education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the increasing demand for education, it has been a huge burden for university

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to pay all the tuition fees.

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, some insist that paying the cost of education is the student's responsibility, not the government's as the

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is only beneficial to the pupils. From my point of view, I am entirely against the notion that education brings about a number of advantages to both

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and civilization. There is no doubt that

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choose whether they

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after the compulsory

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curriculum by themselves and they have to pay for their decision to a certain extent. The most common reason why they go to universities is to find a high-quality job and be qualified in their knowledge for the future, which are their personal benefits to society.

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much greater number of academy graduates are employed with a higher salary than those who just finished high school in developed countries. Apart from the advantages that university

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obtain, a higher rate of academy graduates

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influences

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in various positive ways. The knowledge and professional skills that university pupils develop at the school can contribute to civilization by inventing novel technology, discovering scientific theories, and improving global business.

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, the increased employment rate of people who are highly educated can lead the nation to be stronger and more stable in the economy.

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, scientists and architects who commonly studied

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degrees in universities bring more money from other countries

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than physical workers in other fields. In conclusion,

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the aforementioned reasons, the preference of going to universities for

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among

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can result in not only the opportunity

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the best job for graduates

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the development of the economy and technology of the nation.

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, it would be reasonable for governments to subsidise educational institution

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to afford their tuition fees.