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The increase in the production and consumption of meat has resulted in damage to the natural environment What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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The rise in the amount of
meat
producted
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produced
 and consumed has destroyed the natural habitat. The problem is attributable to deforestation taking place for grazing grass and untreated
waste
 from
production
 but can be
addresed
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addressed
 by
replacement
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the replacement
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 of environmentally friendly
products
. The underlying root of the problem is almost always the destruction of the forest.
In other words
, farmers cut down trees to expand their farming field for cow farms or battery farm which supplies a large quantity of
meat
.
Consequently
, the lack of green space will warm up the earth and cause climate change.
This
because
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 trees are
cable
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capable
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 of absorbing CO2 emissions- the substance
increase
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increases
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 the temperature.
According to
 data research, over one million hectares of forest over the world
was
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were
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 cleared
due to
 the expansion of livestock farming. Another principal cause
destruction
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of destruction
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 to the
environment
 nature is the
remainant
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remnant
remaining
 of
meat
production
. It must be recognized that untreated
waste
 from factory farms
have
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has
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 detrimental effects on
water
 bodies
due to
 high levels of nutrients in animal manure and
run off
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runoff
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.
Thus
, the
remainant
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remains
 enter the
water
 and
results
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result
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 in
water
 pollution.
This
 can be explained that different elements from
waste
such
 as nitrogen and phosphorus can transform the
water
 bodies
in to
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into
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unsustanable
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unsustainable
habitat
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habitats
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.
This
 is true in Vietnam, where untreated
waste
 from the process of producing
meat
 is released
to
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into
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 rivers and lakes
that
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apply
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killed
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killing
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 tonnes of fish.
Perharps
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Perhaps
 a solution to the problem of
meat
production
 and consumption is to be found in the form of changing
eatin
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eating
eatin'
habit
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habits
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. The most effective approach is to put more tax on protein
products
. If the price of
meat
 increases, people will replace it with organic
products
 which are friendly
with
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to
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environment
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the environment
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.
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 the UK as a prime example, where tax on
meat
 increases steadily throughout the year, leading to a fall in
the
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apply
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consumption and a rise in organic
products
 that minimize
the
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apply
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deforestation and adverse
waste
. In conclusion,
destruction
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the destruction
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 of the
environment
 stems from deforestation and
releasing
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the release of
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 the
remainants
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remains
 of
meat
production
.
Nevertheless
,
substituing
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substituting
 protein
products
by
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with
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 organic
products
 will improve the natural
environment
.
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coherence cohesion
Provide a more detailed explanation of how deforestation for grazing grass and untreated waste from production contribute to the damage of the natural environment.
task achievement
Provide specific examples or data to support the claim that over one million hectares of forest have been cleared due to the expansion of livestock farming.
lexical grammatical
Use stronger vocabulary and more varied sentence structures to improve the lexical resource and grammatical range and accuracy.
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