In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries,

children

are usually advised that if they work hard, they can attain all their

dreams

. Applying

this

measure may have some advantages and disadvantages that in

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essay I will explain them. In terms of benefits, I think the most significant profit of implementing

this

method is that

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it empowers

children

to pursue their

dreams

and

consequently

, discover their latent talents.

For instance

, Tomas Edison

did

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the world’s most crucial invention, which was his childhood dream

due to

his mother’s

encouragements

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encouragement

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.

As a result

brought welfare and comfort

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human’s

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life.

Furthermore

, inspiring

children

to go after their

dreams

can lead

in

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upbringing

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the upbringing

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innovative

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and ambitious individuals in the future, who would be able to offer more efficient solutions to human problems.

In addition

,

this

method of upbringing

children

increase

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their knowledge,

results

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and results

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in attaining goals

become

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more perceivable and imaginable for them.

On the other hand

, instilling

this

motto in

children

can cause irreparable

damages

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by getting older.

In other words

,

due to

the

trainers

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trainer's

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or

parents

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parents'

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encouragements

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encouragement

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, they may put themselves under pressure to attain their desires.

However

, in

the

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competitive

society

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society,

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if they cannot reach what they want, the trauma of defeat would be inevitable. To illustrate

this

, we can mention the suicide rate growth among school students after failure

in reaching

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to reach

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their goals.

For example

,

inability

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in passing

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an exam may cost them their life. In conclusion, in order to have a progressed and intellectual society,

children

should be persuaded to pursue their

dreams

. Alongside, they should be taught to be realistic and aware of their abilities.

This

perspective will help them to behave logically when facing failure.