In some countries, ordinary citizens are allowed to keep a gun in their houses. Some people think this is a good idea, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Whether the public should be entitled to own a gun or not is a topic of heated debate. Some people advocate for
this
idea, whereas
others do not. This
essay will discuss both opinions,
and explain why I agree with the latter/former.
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Proponent
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Proponents
this
idea believe that the government should allow the residents to possess in their houses for self-defense. On the one hand, in cases of suddenly finding a thief, people who do not have guns are likely to put themselves and their family
in danger of getting killed, in the worst-case scenario. Especially, in some countries that have high crime rates, the states give citizens permission to use firearms so Fix the agreement mistake
families
that
they in order to protect themselves from accidents. Correct word choice
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However
, if not, they may start protests causing some social instabilities.
On the other hand
, possessing guns is not necessarily a must in
home as in certain situations, it is more of a threat Change preposition
at
for
residents rather than saving them. Public safety still can be ensured through some other measures taken by the states Change preposition
to
such
as increasing the number of police officers patrolling residential areas. Moreover
, the government can impose stricter laws and punishments for those who break the rules. Those approaches can tackle concerns
of ordinary citizens about dangerous crimes and protect them from Correct article usage
the concerns
terrible
consequences of Correct article usage
the terrible
uncontrolled
use of weapons. Especially, mass shootings in the USA recently are Correct article usage
the uncontrolled
also
the reasons/explain why we should raise objections in
possessing firearms. Many cases of innocent people are killed, especially children, which Change preposition
to
emphasis
/Replace the word
emphasises
highlight
the need to prohibit guns.
in conclusion, private weapons Correct subject-verb agreement
highlights
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not necessarily a must in Correct subject-verb agreement
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home
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personally believe that gun is just used by Change the capitalization
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the goverment
goverment
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government
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