You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The maps illustrate how a
school
complex is planned to be developed in the year 2024. Overall
, there will be comprehensive development with regard to buildings, facilities, and roads on the site. The board is expecting a raise of capacity by 400 students in the following year.
In 2004, the school
could only accommodate 600 students. There was only one car park in front of the school
entrance, two school
buildings that were not connected to each other, and one track led to the outdoor sports field in the east from the main entrance in the west. This
school
complex was surrounded by boreal forest on the north, east, and south sides.
By the year 2024, the council will construct a new building, replacing the previous sports venue that will be replaced on the southeast part. A new road will be extended to the east flank, connecting to an extended car park. Furthermore
, the previous school
buildings will be rejoined by a pedestrian connector, closing the original path from not serving as an alternative entrance. The impact of this
development is deforestation of the woodland and enlarged the capacity of the sites by 1.000
students.Correct your spelling
1,000
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