The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph represents the percentages of
paper
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and
cardboard
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,
glass
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containers
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, aluminium cans and plastics recycled between 1982 and 2010 in a certain country.
Overall
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, the recycling
rate
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of all four materials showed a significant rise over the period.
Although
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the
rate
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of
paper
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and
cardboard
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and
glass
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containers
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had some fluctuations, both had the highest recycling rates
at the end
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of the period respectively. In 1982, only
paper
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and
cardboard
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and
glass
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containers
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were recycled which were around 65% and 50% respectively. After four years, the
rate
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of
paper
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and
cardboard
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increased slightly to 70% and
then
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it dropped back to 65% in 1996. During 1990 – 1994, it experienced a rapid surge to 80% which was the highest
rate
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during the given period.
However
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, it declined from 10% until the year of 2010 to 70%. The
glass
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containers
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declined sharply to 40% in 1990.
Nevertheless
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, it went up by 10% in 1994 and continued with a gradual increase to 60%
at the end
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. Recycling of aluminium cans and plastics started in 1986 and 1990 and rates were below 5% at that time. From beginning to end, the percentage of aluminium cans rose dramatically up to around 45% but plastics increased gradually to approximately 9% in 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, cardboard, glass, containers, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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