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The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.

The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.
#stages #book
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The pictures illustrate how the
books
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 are published.
Overall
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, there are nine stages in
this
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 process from the beginning of writing
papers
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 ending in distributing
books
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 to bookshops. The first
stage
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 is that the
papers
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 are written by the author. In the
stage
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 that follows, they are sent to the publishing house, where they are studied by editors, and they correct all grammar, lexical, and punctuation mistakes. The next
stage
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 is that a contract between the publishing house with the author is made. Once the contract has been made, the design of the layout is made on the computer by the designer. Next final decision on the layout is made. The following
stage
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 is
that
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when
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 the ready
papers
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 for printing are printed by the printing machine.
Subsequently
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, the printed
papers
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 are bound and become
books
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. The
last
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stage
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 is that the bound
books
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 are sent to different bookshops,
here
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where
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 they are sold to readers.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, papers, stage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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