The chart below shows the value of one’s country exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015
The
given
bar chart illustrates the income of Verb problem
apply
export
five differnt
items in one country in 2015 & Correct your spelling
different
2016
and Correct word choice
and 2016
below
table compares Correct article usage
the below
percentage
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the percentage
the
difference Change preposition
of the
of
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in
vaule
in two Correct your spelling
value
years
.
Overall
, Petroleum products were the most export
in both Wrong verb form
exported
years
and textiles were the least export
in both Wrong verb form
exported
years
.
In 2015, $ 60 billion
earned
from petroleum products Add a missing verb
was earned
export
and this
income increased from 3% in 2016. Engineered goods earned around 55 billion
dollers
in 2015 and Correct your spelling
dollars
next
year Correct article usage
the next
this
value grew from 8.5% . In contrast
, gems & jewellery
income decreased in 2016 from 5.18% which was $ 40 Correct word choice
and jewellery
billion
and in
in 2015, it was around 45 Change preposition
apply
billion
dollers
.
In Correct your spelling
dollars
this
chart we can not see consideralbe
change Correct your spelling
considerable
from
agricultural products, both Change preposition
in
years
Change noun form
year's
years'
export
earning was quite simillar
, it was 0.81% growth in 2016. Correct your spelling
similar
However
, from Textiles
we can see the highest value difference, which was 15.24% growth in 2016. In 2015, textiles Add a comma
Textiles,
export
earing was around $25 billion
while
in 2016, it was above $ 30 billion
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