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The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
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The given table delineates the information related to the price of
water
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 in five distinct cities
of
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in
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 Australia. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that the value of
water
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 is more if the
usage
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 is over 125KL as compared to when
water
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 is utilised
upto
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up to
 125KL only in most of the cities, except for
melbourne
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Melbourne
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 and
sydney
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Sydney
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. Sydney
have
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 the highest amount for the
usage
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 of
water
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 till 125KL
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that
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which
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 is 0.98
dollar
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, which is constant even if the utilization is more than 125KL.
While
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,
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apply
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 0.42
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dollar
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dollars
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 is the least cost paid for consumption of the
water
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 under 125KL in Adelaide and Perth.
This
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 amount gets increased to 1
dollar
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 for Adelaide and
more
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apply
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0.50
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dollar
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dollars
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 for Perth. Brisbane
cost
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costs
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 the
water
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usage
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 at the rate of 0.8
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dollar
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dollars
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 for 125KL or less,
while
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this
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 gets increased by 0.03
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dollar
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dollars
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 for more than 125KL. In Melbourne, the price remains constant even if
water
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usage
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 is less than or more than 125KL, which counts for 0.78
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dollar
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dollars
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. The average bill per household is the highest in Perth which is 332
dollars
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,
while
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 the least accounts for 253
dollars
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 in Melbourne. 312
dollars
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 are paid by the people living in Adelaide and 2
dollars
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 less in Brisbane. Citizen of Sydney gives 319
dollars
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 as an average bill for the
water
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usage
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, kl, dollar, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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