Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree. You should write at least 250 words.
There
are
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is
number
of people who thinks that schools should focus only on Change the article
a number
the number
the
academic success and help Correct article usage
apply
students
to pass their examination and skills like cookery, dressmaking and wood work
should not be taught in Correct your spelling
woodwork
the
schools. They Correct article usage
apply
states
, Change the verb form
state
these
skills can be Correct word choice
that these
develoved
by Correct your spelling
developed
devolved
parents
as well as
by friends of that student. From my perspective, I strongly believe that this
statement is correct, but I will be explaining both points of view with the support of some relevant examples.
To commence with, school
should focus mainly on the studies of the Fix the agreement mistake
schools
students
. Providing them better
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with better
educaction
, Correct your spelling
education
that
is the main Correct pronoun usage
apply
obejective
that the Correct your spelling
objective
parents
send their children to schools
. Fix the agreement mistake
school
This
help
them to get better remarks in the examinations, which help them to improve their academic background. Change the verb form
helps
In addition
to this
, student
with Fix the agreement mistake
students
some
excellent academic Correct quantifier usage
apply
record
may receive Fix the agreement mistake
records
some
better job opportunities in Correct quantifier usage
apply
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the futur
futur
as compared to Correct your spelling
future
the
other people. For Correct article usage
apply
an
instance, there are many countries with Correct article usage
apply
parents
who want there
children to be a doctor or an engineer, Correct your spelling
their
instead
of chef
or fashion Fix the agreement mistake
chefs
designer
. Fix the agreement mistake
designers
These kind
of fields can only be achieved if the children focus more on their studies and examinations Change the determiner
This kind
These kinds
instead
of some other activities
. Even there are few guardians or parents
who suggest that the school
should provide sports activity
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activities
instead
of some extra curricular
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extracurricular
activities
.
In contarst
to Correct your spelling
contrast
this
, students
and their parents
prefer that school
should have some other skills aside from the subjects and examinations, such
as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork. This
help
them to develop their resume stronger and opens many industrial opportunities. Let's assume Change the verb form
helps
if
the Correct word choice
that
school
have some other activities
such
as cookery, this
will help the student to grow their foundation if he or she wants to be a chef.
To conclude
, school
should provide some Fix the agreement mistake
schools
of
other Change preposition
apply
extra curricular
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extracurricular
activities
but should not make them mandatory for every students
to learn them. Change to a singular noun
student
This
will t
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help
students
to
achieve Fix the infinitive
apply
whatsoever
goal they want to achieve.Correct your spelling
whatever
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