Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

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number of people who thinks that

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should focus only on academic success and help

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to pass their examination and skills like cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught in

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. They state, that these skills can be developed by

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by friends of that student. From my perspective, I strongly believe that

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statement is correct, but I will be explaining both points of view with the support of some relevant examples. To commence with,

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should focus mainly on the studies of the

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. Providing them with better education

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is the main objective that the

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send their children to

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.

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helps them to get better remarks in the examinations, which

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them to improve their academic background.

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with excellent academic records may receive better job opportunities in future as compared to other people. For instance, there are many countries with

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who want their children to be a doctor or an engineer,

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of chefs or fashion designers.

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can only be achieved if the children focus more on their studies and examinations

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of some other

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. Even there are few guardians or

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who suggest that the

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should provide sports

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of some extracurricular

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.

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to

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and their

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prefer that

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should have some other skills aside from the subjects and examinations,

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as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork.

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helps them to develop their resume stronger and opens many industrial opportunities. Let's assume that the

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have some other

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such

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as cookery,

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will help the student to grow their foundation if he or she wants to be a chef.

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,

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should provide some other extracurricular

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but should not make them mandatory for every student to learn

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.

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will help

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achieve whatever goal they want to achieve.