Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

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number of people who thinks that

schools

should focus only on academic success and help

students

to pass their examination and skills like cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught in

schools

. They state, that these skills can be developed by

parents

as well as

by friends of that student. From my perspective, I strongly believe that

this

statement is correct, but I will be explaining both points of view with the support of some relevant examples. To commence with,

schools

should focus mainly on the studies of the

students

. Providing them with better education

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is the main objective that the

parents

send their children to

school

.

This

helps them to get better remarks in the examinations, which

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them to improve their academic background.

In addition

to

this

,

students

with excellent academic records may receive better job opportunities in future as compared to other people. For instance, there are many countries with

parents

who want their children to be a doctor or an engineer,

instead

of chefs or fashion designers.

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can only be achieved if the children focus more on their studies and examinations

instead

of some other

activities

. Even there are few guardians or

parents

who suggest that the

school

should provide sports

activities

instead

of some extracurricular

activities

.

In contrast

to

this

,

students

and their

parents

prefer that

school

should have some other skills aside from the subjects and examinations,

such

as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork.

This

helps them to develop their resume stronger and opens many industrial opportunities. Let's assume that the

school

have some other

activities

such

as cookery,

this

will help the student to grow their foundation if he or she wants to be a chef.

To conclude

,

schools

should provide some other extracurricular

activities

but should not make them mandatory for every student to learn

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.

This

will help

students

achieve whatever goal they want to achieve.