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The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.

The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.
#show #favourite #takeaways #people #canada #indian #restaurants
The pie chart illustrates the rate of the best fast
food
 for people in Canada and
also
 shows the best
food
 type for people.
Furthermore
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 the pie chart shows
the
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 load of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.
Overall
 the proportion of Chinese shows that people love Chinese fast
food
 more than another sort of
food
.
In contrast
, there are three countries that show low percentages
As
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Japan,
Greek
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Greece
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 and Mexican. Looking in more detail, the highest chunk
were
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was
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 for Chinese and
Indian
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Indians
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 the percentages were 34 %, and 26% respectively.
Moreover
, the other types of
food
 appeared close percentage as Italian, Persian and the type of favourite takeaways which is never ordered, the percentages were 10%,9%,and
11%respectively
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11 %respectively
.
Also
, there are three types of
countries
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food
 showing the same % which was 1%. On
other
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the other
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 hand, the number of Indian restaurants shows a different bulk in all years,
firstly
 in 1960 the number was about 300 and after 10 years the
amount
 has increased to around 1000
then
 in 1980 the
amount
 shows
rocketed
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 Increase it is extant to around 3000
also
 for 1990 there was
clear
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a clear
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 increase the
amount
 was around 5000
then
 from 1997 to 2015 the
amount
 was very close it was between 7900
to
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and
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 9000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • favourite takeaways
  • people in Canada
  • number of Indian restaurants
  • 1960
  • 2015
  • types of takeaways
  • popular
  • 55 years
  • country
  • time frame
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