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Advanced technology has brought many beneficial changes to the world. However, some old people today struggle with the use of technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet. How can the elderly benefit from using advanced technologies? How can the elderly be encouraged to use consumer electronics more often?

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Nowadays
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 a significant number of older citizens face
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technologies, but sometimes being confused
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 using and consuming devices could be the main aim of rejection.
Furthermore
, modern technologies have become increasingly popular
due to
 convenience and frequent
opportunity
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 to help
people
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 any issue . The positive aspects of enhanced technologies include the easiest way to help elderly citizens in an emergency.
People
’s health will be controlled by innovative methods of fast reaction
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 special sights of possible danger,
such
 as buttons in smartphones which are studably helpful because of rapid and simple moves to call their relatives or hospitals.
This
 way will contribute to the reduction of
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 situations where a person will be saved.
Nevertheless
, it could be seen that senior citizens should be stimulated
in using
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 electronic devices. There are many ways of possible variations to inform and motivate
people
. In order to contribute to the beneficial functions of development, the government should organize some special occasions for
people
 who are not educated in using technology.
In addition
, not only
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 events have to be popularized, but
also
manufactures
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 possibly implement facilities of
fast
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 and easiest way to learn how to use their
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 will simplify their life. In conclusion, the development of technology has already tackled some issues related to long reactions and inaccessible calls or constant communication with the hospital,
however
people
 still have some difficulties with using it. These issues should be spread if
people
 will define
this
 problem seriously.
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