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The diagram below shows show instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows show instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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the given scheme explains the process of
finstant
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instant
 noodles production.
Moreover
 it reveals how
this
product
 appears on
super market
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supermarket
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 shelves. In general,
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there
here
 are eight stages of manufacturing The first
aperation
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operation
 consists of putting flour into storage silos.
Then
 the flour is mixed with some ore
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, as cost hd linking before the final
product
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delivered to the store. ed, with other ingredients into
dough
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the dough
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 in a special machine. The substance is
further
 stretched into sheets which a cut into thin strips during the fourth stage. The following operation involves the strips
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the
 moment the noodles are formed into dises. After
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 the round-shaped figures are cooked in oil and dried. The seventh stage consists of placing the
product
 into cups and adding some vegetables and spices to it. The final part of
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 process is mainly about the packaging At
this
 moment freshly printed
lables
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labels
 are added to the cups which are sealed after that. As soon as the
product
 (instant noodles) is ready to leave the factory, it is shipped to a shopping facility.
spapers
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papers
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national
 Ces d these book(s) sions of articles
Overall
, it takes a considerably long time for a
product
 to get to a
super market
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supermarket
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.
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