Some people say that history is one of the most important subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary

world

, there is an

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argument

between the importance of two

subjects

such

as

science

and

technology

and

history

. Some people believe that

history

is one of the most important

subjects

in schools,

while

others think that

science

and

technology

are more valuable than

history

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both these views and explain why I support the latter compared to the front. Students can learn various lessons regarding their social lives when they study

history

.

Since historians

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explained how the lifestyles of ancient people have evolved throughout the centuries and how some negative impacts have happened with various worst behaviours of certain people. As an example, they can study the selfishness of

Hitlor

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Hitler

and how it initiated the

second

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Second World War

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world

war. From that,

children

should understand the importance of selflessness over selfishness.

Due to

this

, learning about the past is valuable for school

children

to develop their personal thoughts. In the modern

world

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more job opportunities are available in the

science

and

technology

sector. Because of that many parents believe that their

children

should learn about the mechanical side compared to

history

. Current job trends in information

technology

as software engineers and

the

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researchers engaged in the

science

field are some

of

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the

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examples

for

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that. Since parents always try to persuade their

children

to more earning occupations, they promote

science

and

technology

over

history

as the secondary education option for their

children

.

Furthermore

, scientific and technological

subjects

can enhance students' learning and

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thinking

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capacity. Most

subjects

related to

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topics need critical thinking and analyzing ability which

enhance

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the brain function of

children

.

This

helps them to perform more in their jobs in future compared to colleagues who have learnt

history

.

As

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an

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instance, many employers in reputable companies in the

world

are students who have learnt

science

and

technology

in their schools. Considering the effect on brain capacity, teachers should encourage their pupils to study

subjects

related to scientific and technological fields. In conclusion, I would like to state that

science

and

technology

is

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more valuable than

history

because of the available job market and

it’s

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effects on improving brain functions.