The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
This
illustration demonstrates the development of the public library
through a 20-year period. From an overall
perspective, it is obvious that the library
now claims more facilities than before, such
as the self-service machines, all reference books, storytelling events, etc...
According to
what is shown, there was a room
full of magazines and newspapers 20 years ago. However
, today this
area is substituted with the computer area. In addition
, the enquiry desk was removed and enhanced to self-service machines outside the room
. Moreover
, the old enquiry desk room
changed to a café (instead
of the tables and chairs in the middle of the library
). Although
CDs and videos had a separate room
in the past, more educational services are now available in the same place, including storytelling events and fictional books. Furthermore
, two sofas were provided for children.
In conclusion, the library
evolved to have more enhanced features, such
as the information desk and a new lecture room
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