The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the
comparion
of washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner Correct your spelling
comparison
ownership
and Use synonyms
amount
of time spent Correct article usage
the amount
during
housework in households in one country from 1920 to 2019.
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on
Overall
, Linking Words
while
all of the Linking Words
ownership
of machines showed Use synonyms
the
increasing trajectory during the period shown, time spent Correct article usage
an
for
housework Change preposition
on
expreinced
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experienced
experience
the
downward trend.
In 1920, washing machine Correct article usage
a
ownership
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was dominate
the market with Change the verb form
dominated
40
% percentage and it rose significantly to above 70% in 2019. From 1920 to 1980, both Correct article usage
a 40
of
refrigerator and vacuum cleaner Change preposition
apply
percentage
dramatically increased from almost 0% and 30% to 100% and 90% , respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
Although
Linking Words
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the Refrigerator
Refrigerator
reached to Fix the agreement mistake
Refrigerators
pleatue
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pleasure
please
with
%100 Change preposition
of
percent
in 1980, vacuum cleaner Change the spelling
per cent
ownership
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continue
to grow until Wrong verb form
continued
2000s
and reached Change the article
the 2000s
to
the highest point Change preposition
apply
with
100% in that year.
In 1920 people were spending nearly 50 hours per week Change preposition
of
for
the Change preposition
on
houseworks
and it decreased constantly until 1960 to Correct your spelling
housework
reached
20 hours. Wrong verb form
reach
This
downward trend Linking Words
continue
through to period and in 2019 households were spending nearly 10 hours in the house jobs.Wrong verb form
continued
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