19.The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

19.The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts below display the use of cars, public
transport
,
lories
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lorries
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, commercial and recreational vehicles in the United Kingdom during 1965, 1985 and 2005.
Overall
, cars had the biggest market share in 2010 and
this
is expected to grow even more in the future. Public
transport
will continue to be significant with a small variation, but all others will fall
steadly
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steadily
. In 1965 cars had
two-fifth
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two-fifths
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of the
overal
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overall
share and
this
set
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is set
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to increase to 55% in 1985 and to
three-fifth
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three-fifths
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of the total in 2005. The next most used vehicle is
the
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apply
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public
transport
, with a quarter in 1964 and it will remain the second most used
transport
with 20 in 1985 and 22% in 2005. One-fifth of individuals in 1965 used
lories
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lorries
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and commercial vehicles and
this
remained in 1985,
while
in 2005 it decreased by half. In the first
chart
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chart,
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it illustrates that 15% used recreational vehicles, in 1985 it reduced by 10%, afterwards it rose slightly to 8% in 2005.
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